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Vanilla Cranes

The light of day cuts pretty masks
Out of stuff way too colourful
And glues them on faces of men
Who then stomp chessboard with their feet

In brothels red lanterns do shine
Gates there kept open, welcoming
Children to find their way back home
To the tower of Babylon

Pockets and wallets resonate
With choirs and gospels of the change
Dreaming of freedom and revenge
Who lives by coin, by coin shall die

You ask me "Why do birds have wings,
When sons of mortal men can fly...?"
I guess we humans aim too high
Before sun laughs us in the face

So is there any happy place
Except for our enchanted realm
Where love with smallest ray of hope
Warms time through magnifying glass?

Here kisses taste like vanilla
Sprinkled all over coffee beans;
If we fold enough paper cranes
Do you think we can save the world?
once he asked me who I thought would win the fight over our world, our souls - good or evil? I said in my opinion it would depend on who'd try harder... it's not enough to say one would like to live in a better world, life's what we make it, the responsibility is ours
as to paper cranes - they are believed to make wishes come true - if you wish for something while folding a crane, it should happen :iconcocoloveplz:



inspired by my talks with :iconlovegoldplz: A H M A D and :iconlovegoldplz: C H E R Y L :iconartbycher:'s painting that she dedicated to John Lennon


kindly featured by :iconheartyellowplz: :iconchryssalis: :iconheartyellowplz: in her journal :bulletpink: [link] :bulletpink:

and by :iconheartyellowplz: :iconteaphotography: :iconheartyellowplz: in her journals :bulletpink: [link] :bulletpink: and :bulletpink: [link] :bulletpink:
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Sigma-Echo-Seven Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Student Writer
I have never seen imagery quite like this before. Very well done! :)
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you very much, that's a big compliment :iconflowerforyouplz:
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vikingjon Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Professional General Artist
You are very observant in your thoughts and lyrical in your expressions. :heart:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you, my friend :iconcuteflowerplz:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The images are striking and the concept is very much open to discussion. I really like this one.
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you a lot, my rainbow :iconpeachplz: I'm trying to keep the poems complex; it seems to me recently I've been sensing life on more levels than before :iconbeatingheartplz:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Happy to hear that :)
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scribblingnooly Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Professional
Love this. You have such a way with symbolism. A great rhythm to the voice in this work. The final stanza is brilliant. :D
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you M A R K :iconcuteblushplz:
when I share a new piece, I'm looking forward to hearing your opinion :nod: I'm happy you enjoy reading my poems
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
Nature would be worth saving... the nature of Mankind I'm not so sure.
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