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The Golden Feather

Midsummer nights revive old tales
And magic long forgotten
Mayflies above the lake play scales
Clouds reflect fields of cotton

Cool soothing breeze tangles the hair
Of green carpets on meadows
Where butterflies and poppies share
Kisses nestled in shadows

So lightly, barely touching ground
There hand in hand walk lovers
Two hearts by velvet sunset crowned
Reign over fragile flowers

Like ancient phoenix earth is burned
Each evening in sun's tether
For us, fools, meant to crave and yearn
Stays love - a golden feather
:heart: this poem is dedicated to my dear friend PRITHVI and his beautiful fiance SINDHUJA who are going to get married on February 24th :iconlainloveplz:
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dweckie Feb 6, 2012  Student Writer
Really beautiful, I love the description of the first two stanzas! C:
Made me feel happy :aww:
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TheDarkenedBride Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yay! really? I'm glad to hear that, thank you :iconthesundiver:
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dweckie Feb 14, 2012  Student Writer
Yes really :love:
It's refreshing to read something soft and happy ^-^
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Gothgirl145 Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:love: Beautiful!
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TheDarkenedBride Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much :iconheartafireplz:
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Gothgirl145 Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome!
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
One beautiful poem. More beautiful as a gift :dalove:
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TheDarkenedBride Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you SAIDA :frail:
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