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Ribcage Symphonies

Passion has no taste
It just burns your tongue
While fingers compose symphonies
On nameless ribcages

Black widows don't label their pets
Other than with dull numbers
Making disappointing engagements
Worthwhile episodes of a life wasted

On selfish charity, superiority
Damage of clarity of human heart
Dwelling frightened, cracked and murky
In its fragile shell

Soul is a carton box
That implodes in heavy rain
While rays of sun in a marmalade jar
Mean a miracle, if piled up carefully

A man says he met God in the subway
What most don't want to listen to
See, mirror is the one true friend
As it always smiles back

A horse's eye mutely reflects old days' glory
Unnoticed by those who just recklessly ride
Into sunset full of screaming colours
At dusk that for a change might not be followed by dawn
a mixture of love and fear, of hope and the fact that a big part of our life depends on our own attitude :lightbulb: enjoy :heart: and don't forget to smile back :]
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ArtByCher Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012   Traditional Artist
:love:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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vikingjon Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Professional General Artist
:)
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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chryssalis Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
My god!You always amaze me,my dear Gabriela!!!This is fantastic!!!
"Soul is a carton box
That implodes in heavy rain" and
"See, mirror is the one true friend
As it always smiles back"
You are soooooo talented!!:wow:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought you'd like the part with the box :la: thank you for your support, princess :iconbouquetplz:
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chryssalis Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
My great pleasure,my talented friend!:tighthug::love:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I had to read it three times, because ıt is absolutely beautiful deep and it has a very strong sense of wisdom. You did a wonderful job on this poem my dear. :clap::clap:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: thank you very much, rainbow flower :iconrainbowflowerplz:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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