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Jaws Of Flood

Fish swim in the streets
Sea carries humans away
Water swallowed earth
a haiku for :bulletgreen: :iconsealyanphoenix: :bulletgreen: and her poem :bulletpink: [link] :bulletpink:


kindly featured by :heart: :iconchryssalis: :heart: in her journal :bulletpink: [link] :bulletpink:
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TeaPhotography Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Professional General Artist
WOw, this is absolutely wonderful! :clap:
Great job, always impressed by you! :heart:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :iconlovegoldplz: T E A :D
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Endherance Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
Wishful thinking ?
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:hmm: I am a good swimmer but not a fish, so hopefully this won't come around :fish: :giggle:
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Sealyanphoenix Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This is quite wonderful, thank you!! I featured this on my notes area of my poem.
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're very welcome and thank you :handshake:
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NocturneJewel Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
The opening lines really draws you in, like fish learning to swim on land, a different sea on a different shore, fish we human may be after all.
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:clap: :clap: :clap: I don't know what to add to your interpretation J E W E L :fish: you said it all :D
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NocturneJewel Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
I'm glad you enjoyed my fishy interpretation! A mermaid on land I feel myself to be...
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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