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False Tunes

In the noise of noble orchestra
I can't hear a single song
What's the point in arguing
With one who's never wrong?

So drown red roses in a vase
Put golden ball and chain around my neck
A prisoner you can't bring back
For they're not free to leave

Go, hurry to count my angels
And put price tags on their feet
Saving up for an alibi
For next time trust will sound retreat

Everything changes and so does fear
Of both leaving you and staying near
The tighter my corners are getting,
The wider appears the rest of the world
some say love has answers for every question... not every love brings happiness but that's not always a reason to terminate the relationship :shrug: is it illogical? most certainly; but it happens way too often :iconloveblackplz:
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NocturneJewel Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
I hope you find a love that will ring true...and write you beautiful poetry too! :iconsparklingpinkloveplz:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconlovegrayplz: :iconloveblueplz: :iconlovewhiteplz: thank you so much, my dear J E W E L :tighthug: you're such a great girl!
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NocturneJewel Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
:iconhug1plz:
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Gary-thedreamingpoet Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Professional Writer
Painfully true...
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
sadly it seems so... THANK YOU :heart: G A R Y
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chryssalis Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
Oh,how i adore your writting!!!:wow:
"Put price tags on the angels feet"!!Fantastic!!!:clap:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you, princess A T H I N A :iconpeachplz:
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LancelotPrice Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
Angels should be free from boxes, and tagless.
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think so too, L A N C E, thank you :hug:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
Veiled abuse, or not so veiled at all...
Anyway from the entire poem the end catch my spirit searching for something else... a tune called freedom!
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