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Dogwood Rose

My dogwood rose, you jewel of the field
Don't rack my heart, please to my arms do yield
Trust I've seen one too many orchids gold
But what abounds in you they don't behold

You fragile beauty growing near the brook
Don't be mistaken by feathers of rook
To stranger's eyes I appear rather blunt
But in my black chest beats heart valiant

Oh, flower marked with summer's warmest scent
Can't you see how your fate with mine does blend?
To perish upon your petals I crave
This world for me hasn't a sweeter grave
summer rides a horse that either runs fast or even faster, each summer day carries the essence of laughter, friendship, careless joy... summer love then is more intense, bittersweetly decadent - it tempts, warms and exaggerates because as quickly as it started, it most likely will end :iconbeauroseplz:
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TeaPhotography Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Professional General Artist
Are you sure you're not a bard?
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hmm, that's difficult to say... I'm pretty sure I don't have a beard though :giggle:

and you're a lovely girl :iconcip33:
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chryssalis Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012
You write so beautifully!!!:love:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
your words make me feel honoured, princess ATHINA :tighthug: thank you :frail:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The whole poems flows so nicely my dear. And the rhyme :eager: Love it:love:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you S A I D A :iconwineplz: I always pay attention to rhythm even in free verse poetry or spoken word but rhyming is pure fun :woohoo: it makes me happy to see you like the result :hug:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes I do. Rhyme rocks :eager:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012
I don't know what I like the most, if the poem itself, or the little poem in your descriipiton. Either way, I love them both!!
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, thank you :D
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012
you're welcome! \(^v^)/
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