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Dilemma

Reach through the bubble
Orbits of shooting stars
Too flawless to be real
Those perfect circles suffocate

Crush the dormant fear
Memories of tomorrow drip down oh so loud
In a world where corners have not been invented
You're standing in your tears of joy

Or maybe it's another boy
Who offers you a scared gaze
From the mirror
Do you still wish truth's voice to sound clearer?
written for :bulletyellow: :iconadherance: :bulletyellow: and his picture


many times it happens we don't feel content, although we have all that we wanted or even more than that... then it's time to ask ourselves, whether things really are what they seem
happiness costs sincerity :frail:
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chryssalis Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012
Bravo,Gabriela!!:clap::clap:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you, princess A T H I N A :iconbouquetplz:
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Adherance Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012
The sound of truth often falls on deaf ears, thankfully i feel this...thank yo for the gift and for understanding me in some way.
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it was a pleasure :iconstarplz:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It is so great that you can write such beautiful piece inspired by other pieces of art. Great really :clap:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much SAIDA :iconthesundiver: sometimes I can't help :D
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know what you mean:D
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Krastix98 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love this one! O_O
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :iconsparklesmileplz:
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Brici5 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thats a big dilemma
I like this one
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :D I'm happy you like
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Brici5 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
my pleasure!
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ZexyPineCones Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I believe the answer is...YES!!! :)
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconlawooplz: you're a courageous man!
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ZexyPineCones Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know...I'm amazing. :)
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012
nicely done, both works...
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you very much K A Y :iconhappysunplz:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
And I'm thanking you too... you always find wonderful little and pleasant drawings colouring your comments... They're full of joy and warmth like yourself!
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:aww: yays! :iconifeelfluffyplz:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012
Like this one!! Perfect!!
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NovaOscura Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice question. (and great job ;) )
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you very much :frail:
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