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A Heretic's Psalm

His features shows me every face
I meet in crowd of empty space
Long ago I have lost control
Merciful devil, bless my soul

My eyes give his figure a smack
Leaving stigmata on his back
Draw him nearer's my only goal
Merciful devil, bless my soul

Darkest night to me reveals trace
To Lune's cold silver ears I howl
Deliver him to my embrace!
Merciful devil, bless my soul

Here I stand, hailing deities black
Begging them to hallow my prowl
Make him mine, let me meet my rack
Merciful devil, bless my soul
:blackrose: have you ever wanted someone SO badly? more than air to breathe, more than water to drink, more than ANYTHING? so much that it was driving you insane, that you knew even if you actually got them into your arms, it would be too late to save you from that painful lust...


:blackrose: I'm still having fun with traditional forms; even though the kyrielle's refrain originally contains god, I told myself I'd make it a bit more juicy :P

enjoy :blackrose:


miss :bulletred: :icondottieonthemoon: :bulletred: featured this poem in her journal :bulletblack: [link] :bulletblack:
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chryssalis Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012
:faint:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:ambulance:
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QueenOfQuills Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Student Writer
Powerful repeated line there! LOVE THIS
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you very much :rose:
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Metalrockindaddy Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Great work, powerful. The description below made it even better. Nice job!!! :clap:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much :rose:
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dweckie Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012  Student Writer
Amazing! I love the first stanza, particularly the line "I meet in crowd of empty space".
I'd love to see more traditional stuff from you :love:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you THANK YOU :happybounce:

also I like that line :) when I crave someone, many things remind me of him and I most enjoy daydreaming at moments when I'm alone
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dweckie Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Student Writer
I know the feeling :aww:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:highfive:
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